Hi Leo, I really liked how you carefully explained your learning, next time maybe you can add a more eye catching title and a ending, but over all very good!!
Hi Leo, I really liked how you carefully explained your learning, next time maybe you can add a more eye catching title and a ending, but over all very good!!
Hi Leo i like the way you explained about the chocolate factory and that you said I walked and found a dollar and that you said you wanted to spend it on another chocolate. I like how you said you found a golden ticket in it .Next time i think you should say how much hours or minutes it took to get to the factory. It’s a great story though.
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Hi Leo, I really liked how you carefully explained your learning, next time maybe you can add a more eye catching title and a ending,
ReplyDeletebut over all very good!!
Bailey
http://paroagreybaileyr.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Leo, I really liked how you carefully explained your learning, next time maybe you can add a more eye catching title and a ending,
ReplyDeletebut over all very good!!
Bailey
http://paroagreybaileyr.blogspot.co.nz/
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ReplyDeleteHi Leo i like the way you explained about the chocolate factory and that you said I walked and found a dollar and that you said you wanted to spend it on another chocolate. I like how you said you found a golden ticket in it .Next time i think you should say how much hours or minutes it took to get to the factory. It’s a great story though.
ReplyDeleteHey Leo. I like how you worked out the work that you have been doing in maths in your class.Maybe you need some punctuation, in the third slide.
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