Thursday 30 June 2016

Maths

W.A.L.T calculate the probability of getting a red or yellow jellybean to show the workings out we used a tree diagram. 


Thursday 23 June 2016

Narative Writing

W.A.L.T use a perspective that is appropriate for the reader
W.A.L.T use emotive language,alliteration and similies


Starter:Write a story about a depressed wildebeest who discovers a talking frog


The abandoned Lumber Mill


It was a cool frosty morning as Jack woke up from his rough,small,sharp bed.Jack stretchers his back and waits until he hears a click.Jack is a wild weird wildebeest that is droopy and depressed because he lives alone in the woods on a cliff.”What a cold morning it is but that doesn't stop me from going outside and getting vitamin D”.Jack walked outside and suddenly a chill went through his body.


Jack waits until it gets warmer like a hot summer day until he is ready to go outside to face Jack Frost but when he walked outside he disappeared.Jack carried on walking West until he reached his bungee jump.He hooks himself up and prepares to jump down the side of the cliff.Suddenly he jumps and along the way to his surprise he finds a stranded freaky fearless frog that is just sitting there.


So Jack waits until the cord isn't jumping up and down and he is just hanging there but he needs to act fast because he has set up a timer for the bungee cord to go up.Jack instantly thought fast and snatched up the frog on his way up.Jack says “hello there buddy why were you up here by yourself in the middle of nowhere”.”Houdini” the frog says “You you talk? Well we will discuss this later but first what is your name?” Houdini Houdini Houdini” “ so you are the magician Houdini?” “Houdini”They eventually make it up to the top and they head East to get back to his house.


Houdini isn’t scared of much he is strong like a dumb beetle.They had a horrible cup of tea while discussing in how he can talk but the fearless frog only says houdini.Jack thinks to himself maybe the magician Houdini taught him how to speak and must of performed a disappearing trick but couldn’t bring him back but clumsy Jack accidentally said that out loud so the frog disappeared into the misty woods...


Jack is hunting him down looking for footprints running in all directions until he hears an owl and suddenly someone said dini from out of nowhere.They kept on speaking so jack followed the voice until it led to a dead end.Jack carried on his search without realising that he is lost.To Jack’s astonshiment he found a an abondend lumber mill..Jack has a suspicion that he might of enterd in the lumber mill without realising it could collapase any minute.So Jack felt like he was going to be a hero that saves civilians but instead he saves animals.


He enters the lumber mill and he knows everything could go wrong in here,he just imagines the fearless frog jumping over saws,crawling through gaps and climbing over the dangerous contraptions.Jack knows the risk but it is all worth it to save Houdini.He ventures throughout the abandoned lumber mill confident and courageous.He unexpectedly found the control room. He decides to press some buttons that could be a disaster,some were blue,red and green but they all had sawdust on them so it was hard to recognize which colour was which.


There were loud noises for all the buttons except for one which was the light switch but as you might of expected it didn’t work.He left the control room still not know what all those buttons did.Jack searched throughout the lumber mill being very cautious like flies around a venus fly trap.He decided to leave this deathtrap and try to return to his home…


To be continued


                    

Thursday 9 June 2016

Blooms activities

Evaluation 6 points: is the title good? Or could it be better.


Title:Dirty Dishes

yes it is a good title because it explains what might happen in the story

Knowledge when was the story set provide evidence from the book

Leo’s opinion: I think it was set out in the evening because it was reasonably dark and the dishes wern't done so he had to do it.