Evaluation 6 points: is the title good? Or could it be better.
Title:Dirty Dishes
yes it is a good title because it explains what might happen in the story
Knowledge when was the story set provide evidence from the book
Leo’s opinion: I think it was set out in the evening because it was reasonably dark and the dishes wern't done so he had to do it.
Hi Leo,I like the way you set out your work because all of the work is cramped up so well done.Next time could you give me an example of the title explaining what might happen in the story.
ReplyDeleteHi Leo,I like the way you set out your work because it's not cramped up in one little spot.
ReplyDeleteFor a next you could put in some colour or something :)
From Shannon